Sunday, April 29, 2012
2 excercises from practice of poetry
Friday, April 27, 2012
Critical assignment
Thursday, April 19, 2012
Poem inspired by Pure Country
The lights and smoke,
The laser shows,
The loud bass bumping,
My true friend knows,
How much this is not me.
Crowded cities,
Sold out shows,
Fans ecstatic,
My true friend knows
How much this is not me.
Wide open spaces
Where the wild breeze blows
Living free,
My true friend knows
How much that this is me.
Smokey bar rooms
Small town shows
Work boots dancing
My true friend knows
How much that this is me.
Why must we do things
That we don’t want
Be like a puppet
Put up a front
To please everyone around you.
Be free and wild
Like a feral horse
Run with the wind
And then of course
I know that this is me.
Critical thinking
In W.H. Auden’s essay titled “Poetry as Memorable Speech”, he talks about how even though there are many types of poetic language used in poetry, even the simpler language can be memorable. Any type of language that makes us think or inspires certain emotions can be considered memorable. Different poems will do this to different people. Certain lines or themes may invite us to remember things that happened in our past or resonate with us based on our personal beliefs.
In Philip Larkin’s poem, Reasons for Attendance, he describes a scene where he is standing outside of a bar or dance club watching the people inside. This poem has many pieces of memorable speech to me.
“ The wonderful feel of girls. Why be out there?
But then why be in there? Sex, yes, but what
Is sex? Surely to think the lions share
Of happiness is found by couples – Sheer
Inaccuracy, as far as I am concerned.”
This particular section reminds me of weekends spent drinking uptown in Athens. When I hear this section I immediately go to memories of walking down Court Street and looking into the bars and seeing the commotion of all the other college aged kids. There always is a feeling that many of the people are looking for sexual experiences, couples or not, when you look into the bar windows. There is always someone on somebody’s lap or dancing on someone. Larkin’s tone is similar to mine. He wonders why they do this because he does not feel like that it the place for him. He gives off the impression that he would rather be somewhere more quiet enjoying himself. “But not for me, nor I for them; and so/ With happiness. Therefore I stay outside”. The voice sticks with me because it sounds like something that would be going through my head while being in the same situation.
Auden says, “The test of a poet is the frequency and diversity of the occasions on which we remember his poetry”. While I may not think of this poem every time I am up town, probably due to the state in which I am in during those occasions, It is the type of poem that if I were up there sober I would remember. The poem does not specifically say that he is sober at the time but the experience of being outside looking in reminds of being the only sober one at a party. You are able to look around and really wonder ‘why do I ever do this’. Memorable speech does not have to be about anything major such as a death or beauty as long as it makes you think. Larkin seems to have a indifferent tone until the very end where he says “Or I lied”. This make you wonder if he was saying this and then coming to the realization that he does in fact want to be in the bar sharing in the chaos. He seems a little unsure if maybe under different circumstances someone else migh be standing outside looking in ad seeing him in there.
Friday, April 6, 2012
when i was one and twenty
Happy
When I was one and twenty
To Ol’ Friends I will go
To drink some beer and shoot some pool
And hang out with my bros
I don’t know where the night will take us
I just know I will not drive
Maybe to the honkeytonk
To show them how I jive.
It feels so good
To be this age for so long I have waited
Just hanging out and having fun
The thought makes me elated.
Bummer
When I was one and twenty
I have to leave my friends
To go to school and read some books
Not glad of how this ends.
I don’t like leaving home
For the school I chose to pick
My friends are here my rots are deep
The thought can make me sick.
Off to school I go now
Summer memories bright in my head
No home cooked meals endless nights
And of course my comfy bed.
Mixed feelings
When I was one and twenty
School work still in my mind
To drink or study that’s the question
What mischief can I find?
My friends at school are great
Not as much as those from home
We still have fun and happy times
When Athens we do roam.
I will surely miss the farmer’s fields
And stacking hay up in the barns
But Athens is a wondrous place
With many subtle charms.
blog # 2
The two poems, “Easter, 1916” by Yeats and “Returning We Hear Larks” by Rosenberg, both portray a different view of war. In Yeats’ poem, it seems that he is talking more about the beauty of war while Rosenberg paints a portrait of misery that is only lightened by the sounds of the larks. At any minute that noise could be bombs or some other terror but the sounds of the birds help to calm the soldiers. Rosenberg likes to use similes in his poem to help you to paint the portrait as well as Yeats, who does it to compare the feelings that he has towards war to things that are more beautiful. “that is Heaven’s part, our part to murmur name upon name, as a mother names her child when sleep at last has come on limbs that have run wild (Yeats)”.
These poems compare to us because there are many hardships that people face everyday and there is always that one thing that gives us hope even when we think that there is none. Not specifically towards war, but Rosenberg’s example of the larks effect on the soldiers, shows an example of this that can be seen in many different aspects of life.
Contemporary poem
Rob Densmore first went to Afghanistan in 2004 with the US navy. he returned in 2007 as a freelance journalist particularly concerned about the effects of the turmoil on people. He then did a Masters degree in London in War and Psychiatry returning in 2008 to conduct research on mental health in private security contractors.
His stories, interviews, and poems deal mostly with the content and historical perspective of these trips - but "with the human element in mind".
A taste of Afghanistan
City sand has its own taste
Not the country’s dust,
But darker.
It’s stronger – bitter parts
Under infantry foot.
Under 500 years going and coming.
Kipling’s finest up and over –
Through the pass,
Through the places where soldiers stood
In stolid white snow.
Cemeteries in the pass where Alexander’s own
Fell on the square rocks.
Paved with smoothed over river rock,
This open grave – white, bare.
Kabul sand polishes everyone’s edges.
Tajiks sharp on the cusp
And Northern Alliance coming down
Hard in the fray.
They all want each other’s throats.
Their wives lost in the fight –
Save for pointed heels and
Gold bangled over fine red henna.
Eastern sand and southern sand,
Pakistan sand crooked as broken teeth,
Herati sand pure and rising to the top.
Nothing mixes and there is no space in between.
If God loved this place he doesn’t now.
If He breathed in the brass bullet casings
And the diesel air and spiteful prayers.
A place for lust and dirty children
And the things night can hide.
What things grown men can hide-
In the dark corners of their own children’s rooms.
In the big shadows of a capital with no master and no disciple.
No scope for all things to come together
The sand and the dust and the dirt that makes things grow-
When it is left alone.
But we’ve put our fingers in it
And the stirring and stamping won’t leave
Much for the growing.
Dust bowls and cyclone air will take the rest.
Every village is filled with it now –
Dust from our bombs and inside our APCs.
Dirt scrubbed from our rifle actions
And ground into our sweaty palms like Mississippi silt.
And still nothing grows.
I’ve taken a knee in seventeen villages –
On street corners and broken down roundabouts,
On highways and in shattered homes.
On helo pads and plywood chapel steps,
On the backs of dead men-
And screaming vile women.
They will, all of them, bend or break –
It is either them or me.
It’s either winning or losing
And putting in its place
What does not belong,
Sand of a different taste and hue
That cannot tell me it is sorry.
Rob Densmore, 2009